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shanasae Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The bottom part of this piece is the most definitely the strongest part of this piece. Following up the beam causing the calamity. There is a lot going on in this piece so it gives you enough to look at but doesn't overwhelm you which is a really hard thing to mediate. I know I have problems with it. I'm either underwhelming or overwhelming with some of my things. So it's nice to see balances in art :) Great job.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thanks. I'm actually working with a team on this one, so I had to leave room for the colorist to do a few effects. The lines for the beam are guidelines, and the myriad of explosions will make much more sense once the shockwave ripples are added. I'm curious about weighing my lines on this one, did I weight things properly or were they too similar?
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shanasae Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the lines are done really well. The fact that the bottom half feels heavy, since it is rock/a heavier structure being destroyed, gives it that weight. Whereas the sky has much lighter lines. It's a good balance. You did a really good job on this.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
thanks. that's good to know for future drawings...
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BandanaBlue Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow there is a lot going on in this. I'm not sure what's up and what's down, but it's still so interesting to look at. I like this as a black and white by itself ad how there is so much to look at. Is it overwhelming? Yes, but in a good way. It leaves a lot to interpret and I like that in a piece of art.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012   Traditional Artist
not much interpretive art here i think? its just a Michael Bay level explosion fest. that's all i was going for, i think the colorist will make this look super awesome...
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chesterzerousygirl Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
I have no clue what it is
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
its a lot of explosions.
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chesterzerousygirl Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Well, my first guess was going to be Android Cell exploded and left all his spots/markings all over the place lol But I haven't seen any DBZ fanwork from you so I kept that one to myself at first.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012   Traditional Artist
yeah this is for a comic i'm being commissioned for, so no dbz stuff...
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ButterflyPigment Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great detail.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
i'm so glad u like it! ty for taking the time to write this!
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TheEmeraldMasquerade Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very impressive. Great work. :D
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
i'm so glad u liked it,and glad to hear your thoughts... considering its been a while.
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TheEmeraldMasquerade Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome

Yeah I know :D
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
great to have you back! :)
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TheEmeraldMasquerade Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^-^
You draw really great surroundings. :)
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
ty! i pride myself on that...
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TheEmeraldMasquerade Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah, ah, you're welcome :)
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012   Traditional Artist
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Blahblah1984 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
huzzah!
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
glad u like it, page 5 is pretty simple so I'll likely be done with that soon

sorry to hear that we couldn't get ~M-Link. but there are a lot of notes for an eventual colorist that I have for this one...
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M-Link Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Digital Artist
Thanks for the mention Paz and we've been talking it over and looking at your great pages and I'm in.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
great to hear, let me know when you;re going to start, i have notes in terms of how to color the pages.
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M-Link Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Digital Artist
how to notes!!!????
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
not so much "how to" its just that with like in the first page I've got these hexagonal spaces and laser bolts. but they're not the effect i want, those are spaces I've left for you to do your own effects and stuff...
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M-Link Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012   Digital Artist
ha ha, I knew what you meant. Normally 'page notes'. How to notes sounds kind of like color by numbers. I sure they will be very helpful and let you know when I make a start on the pages.
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012   Traditional Artist
so that's what they're called! i haven't had to work on projects that required special effects, so all the terminology is a bit unfamiliar to me... i hope you don't mind that I'm leaving spaces for you to fill in. I'd do them normally, but with sci fi effects it can look really lame if i'm trying to do them with just ink and paper...
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Blahblah1984 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
ok, sounds great. I am not in too big of a hurry to track a colorist at this point. I really wanna finish the script first. :)
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
sounds good, i'll let you know when im done with page 5
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Blahblah1984 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
ugh, you work really fast.... I will constantly be struggling to stay ahead of you, won't I? :)
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
I'm pretty sure that won't be the case, I'm only punching out page 5 because from a pencils inks standpoint its real simple. Then I'm gonna do some more design work for my GN, I'm alternating between the two, when i hit creative roadblocks, so my pace will even out over time...

plus i need to take time to practice my skills...
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Blahblah1984 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
sweet! I will chip away at the plot every night and update you soon!
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
great! no rush though, take your time...
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wingsofdragons Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
love the stone wall at the bottom
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
yeah the moving bits of rock were an element that i really wanted...
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wingsofdragons Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
done so very well.....really liked that part
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pazlowq Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
:aww:
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